Part 5

Yay! 6 likes and 6 predictions! Awesome! So time for Part 5.

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I hope you love me and Super Dragon’s creativeness! 🙂

But we still have 2 more parts to go! And to see the next we need 7 likes and 7 predictions! Let’s go!

~SD

Part 4

Thank you to the people who liked and predicted on the previous post! That went by quickly. 😉

Anyway here is part 4 of The Bad Burier! Let’s see if some predictions were correct.

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I hope you liked it! I can’t tell you what happens next, but I think SD gets pretty creative. 😛

And it is JUST A COMIC, so whatever happens to the SD in the comic, doesn’t happen to me. 😆

Ohhh! I just want to show you the next one so badly! But to see the next one we have to get 6 likes and 6 predictions! No biggie, you guys can do it!

~SD

The Prologue

It’s finally here! The prologue to The Chronicles of Sleepy Feather! I just had to write a prologue. I just needed to do it for some reason.

Anyway, here it is!

Prologue

The two children, dressed in Halloween costumes that made them look like pumpkins (along with matching trick-or-treat candy holders), surveyed the flyer for the so-called ‘Monster Carnival’. They seemed to be arguing about something, something that seemed rather important to them by their use of extreme body language and expressions.

“Come on, Crazy Tiger! We have to go and see the Monster Carnival today!” the girl with dark hair and a straight posture said heatedly, her hands moving haphazardly as she took a step backwards and ran into a lamppost. Nine-year-old Silver Feather sighed as she tried to persuade her friend Crazy Tiger to go with her to the ‘Monster’ carnival on the newly discovered Monster Carnival Island.

“I don’t know about you, Silver, but my parents will care if I get back from a carnival after midnight. It took them so much persuasion to get me to even leave Cryptids Island!” the girl’s friend, a short but round boy with shockingly bleached-blonde hair.

“Crazy! Please?” Silver begged. Crazy sighed in defeat and nodded, as though it was taking a lot of effort. Silver smiled and lead the way to the Monster Carnival.

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The man hidden by a bandanna around his face swished his long cloak behind him as he approached the nine-year olds. He rubbed his gloved hands together as he passed them his hand to shake. “Welcome,” he drawled in an accent, “to the Monster Carnival. I am…” he paused here for dramatic effect, “…The Ringmaster.”

Silver Feather shivered against her will at the creepiness of this man as she followed him into the big top.  She did not see anything that made it look like a carnival, except something big covered by a cloth. She sat down with Crazy on a pile of dust. “What’s this?” she asked, not really wanting to hear the answer.

“Oh, just the bones of someone who came here earlier,” The Ringmaster said in an eerie tone. Is this his idea of a joke? Silver thought. He must have a pretty twisted sense of humour. But her gut feeling told her that she was wrong. The Ringmaster was in the ring soon. “Ladies and gentlepoptropicans, behold: THE MONSTER GIRL!” He pulled the cloth off and revealed a most hideous creature, half-Poptropican, half…monster. Silver resisted the urge to scream. Crazy did not refrain.

“And you are next!” he yelled, coming closer and closer and gripping their wrists. This time Silver cried out, but the Ringmaster paid no attention for her shrieks. “You know, you remind me of a girl I knew once…pathetic, useless and screaming when the going gets tough. Weak.” He pulled the two children deeper and deeper into the room, ignoring their loud shrieks.

Do you like it? Hate it? Just tell me what you think!

Part 3

I’m back! Miss me? My trip was fun, but no internet was tough. I had over 900 emails when I got home. 😯

Anyway here is Part 3 of The Bad Burier! I want to thank everyone who liked the previous post, predicted, and waited for me to get back. 🙂

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I hope you liked it! This time we need 6 likes and 5 predictions to see the next episode. 😉

~SD

The Bad Burier – Part 2

I want to thank Samwow5, Silver Wolf, Cool Smarticle, fruitbat7777, and myself (Spotted Dragon) for liking the Part 1 post! I want to thank Samwow5, Cool Smarticle, and fruitbat7777 for their predictions. Remember, we can have more than the needed amount of likes and predictions! 😉

Anyway here is Part 2:

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To see the the next part this post has to get 5 likes and there have to be 4 predictions on what will happen next. 🙂

And I just want to remind everyone that I’m leaving on Wed. and won’t be back until Mon. So no TNPT Issue this week, sorry.

~SD

SD & HB – Episode 4 – The Bad Burier – Part 1

Hey guys! The poll for the next story I write was very close. But Super Dragon & Hamburger Boy won! I will make another episode of The Spotted Show next then. 🙂

Normally there are 4 parts of an episode, but there are 7 this time.

I’m going to post 1 part at a time, but to see the next part the post has to get at least 5 likes every time. and at least 3 people have to make a prediction for what will happen next.

BTW: I’m leaving on Wednesday for a family reunion of mine and won’t be back until the Monday after that. So there won’t be a TNPT this week, or a TMT, sorry. 😦 Hopefully I can post all of episode 4 before I leave.

Anyway, here is part 1, which is the beginning, so not that exciting.

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I hope you like it! If you haven’t read past episodes click here.

~SD

The Adventures of Sleepy Feather – Part 2 of Characters

Okay, so we only need a couple of refugees and a few people willing to let their characters be monsters, and we’ll have all the characters. I’m so pleased that so many people want their characters in the story.

So now you need to fill in this form of sorts:

  • Name you want to be known as:
  • Age:
  • Gender:
  • Personality:
  • Appearance: (preferably a pic from the avatar studio accompanying)
  • History:
  • Sample of how they act: (a paragraph maybe)
  • Anything else to add:

And by the way, can you give me ideas of what to review? It can be anything; episodes, islands, characters, anything!

APPROVED:

Name: Spotted Dragon a.k.a. Spots

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Personality:
 Rebellious, Partly Goth (Like Raven from Teen Titans), Smart, Says “Whatever” a lot, Funny, Mostly Tom Boy (Not Girly), but likes fashion, Friendly (Only to people she likes), Loner (Alone).

Appearance: http://www.poptropica.com/avatarstudio/avatar.html?a=baWVxZnJkYjI5dmJHRnNZVEV6

History: Spots is the daughter and only child of The Ringmaster. She watched her father grow more evil every day and as just a hopeless kid, couldn’t do anything to help. Her father left Mrs. Dragon when Spots was 10. She was poor. Once she entered Middle School she decided to lay low, wear black all the time, and learn to notice everything around her. It helped because she could sense a bully coming for her a mile away. One day when she was spray painting in an alley behind the school a girl came up to her. It was strange because Spots didn’t sense her coming.

“Vandalism is wrong ya know” the girl said. “What does it matter?” Spots asked. “Let’s just say it does matter. I fight evil” the girl replied, “I’m Silver Wolf, who are you?” “I’m Spotted Dragon” Spots said “I’m gonna call you Spots. Come on I’ll be your friend” Silver said. The nickname stuck and it was almost like a wave of energy forced Spotted to be Silver’s friend. It was weird at first, but they has a lot in common.

Then Silver introduced Sleepy Feather to Spots. From then on they were 3 best friend fighting evil and Spots got just a spark of happiness in her. Then Silver and Sleepy wanted to go to the town circus one day. Spotted didn’t even reply, she just ran to the school’s alley, where she felt safe and cried. When the girls found her she wanted to stop crying, but couldn’t. They were the only ones to see her cry, not even her mom saw her because Spots had to be strong. That’s when Silver and Sleepy learned about her father. The 3 girls went to the circus any way though. And Miss Dragon died that day. Spotted shares an apartment now with Sleepy and Silver. Spotted’s 2 best friends and only friends keep her going.

Sample of Acting: (Look at personality and history)

Other: Spots never called her father father. She called him Sir. They never shared an emotional moment or played together. The Ringmaster who always yell at Spotted saying she was a stupid, weak little brat who was interrupting his work. Spots still has nightmares.

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Name you want to be known as: The Ringmaster

Age: 72

Gender: Male

Personality: mysterious, but excited

Appereance: super tall skinny man in a black cloak with a top hat

History: Went to the circus with his father, until the chicago circus fire of 1944. The father began to grab kids and throw them out the tent, now being swallowed by flames. When all the children were safe (or at least he thought) he ran out of there, but got trampled and stepped on from the ground and lay there in pain until there was nothing left. The Ringmaster vowed revenge with those that let his father in rather than out.

Sample:
With a black poof of dust The Ringmaster appeared, tall, skinny, old, hidden in his midnight cloak.

“What do you want?” He said in a deep voice.

“Uh, we just wanna see the circus.” said ____________

“Well here it is!”

Suddenly two gigantic contraptions pushed the curious kids into their seats.

“The one and only Monster Carnival!”

Cages dropped to the floor, smashing so hard the doors open. Animal mutants crawl, fly and run around terrorizing the little kids.

“Yes.” said The Ringmaster. “Yes.”

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Name-Strange Servant

Age-67

Gender-Male

Personality-Loyal,but a little nervous.

Appearance-A mix of waiters,preferably from Spy and Game Show.

History–Been serving the Feathers since 23 years.

Sample of acting-See personality.

Other-Has a mysterious past.

The Chronicles of Sleepy Feather

Hey, fellow Poptropicans! I’m Sleepy Feather here, and I’m telling you about my brand-new story, The Chronicles of Sleepy Feather! In which Sleepy Feather *wait for it* goes to Monster Carnival Island!

Thing is…I only have three characters; Sleepy Feather, the protagonist, her pilot, Cool Skull (my brother, PoptropicaDetective2 on Poptropica) and her maid, Quiet Bird (my friend, Popsicle2014 on Poptropica). I need so many more! Here is the cast list:

  • Main Character: Sleepy Feather
  • Sidekick/Best Friend: Spotted Dragon
  • Refugee 1:
  • Refugee 2:
  • Butler (of SF): Strange Cat
  • Mad Scientist/Bad Guy: fruitbat777
  • Mad Scientist’s Spokesperson: Samwow5
  • Kidnapped Girl: Cool Smarticle
  • Person Slowly Becoming a Monster: Nintendo Friend
  • Maid (of SF): Quiet Bird
  • Pilot: Cool Skull
  • Monster 1:
  • Monster 2:
  • Monster 3:
  • Hypnotised Sidekick for Bad Guys: Silver Wolf
  • Glitch Girl: Nameless

So, let me explain what you’re in for. The sidekick is pretty much the secondary main character; he/she is SF’s best friend. The two refugees are based off Simon and Marceline in the AT episode ‘Simon and Marcy’; they escaped being made monsters but they live on a raft in the sea between Time Tangled and Monster Carnival. The butler is just like a servant who appears at the start. The Mad Scientist is the one making everyone into monsters, and the Spokesperson speaks for him because he’s too busy. The Kidnapped Girl has a birth defect so the Mad Scientist took her to take her birth defect DNA and mix it with any animal and human DNA to make the cell of a monster. The Person Slowly Becoming a Monster is in the outbreak, but he’s lasted human for a while longer than others. The monsters are…well, monsters. And just because I only listed three, doesn’t mean there can’t be more! And finally, the Hypnotised Sidekick is there to be the sidekick and he’s hypnotized, so he’ll do whatever the bad guys want. The monsters are basically animal/human people, and the animal DNA comes from various animals around Poptropica including Charlie’s cat and the Booga Shark (one unfortunate person actually had their DNA mixed with the Hydra on Mythology!).

Well, that’s all, folks! Remember, to be in the story, you must sign up in the comments. Thanks!

-Sleepy Feather

The Spotted Show – E1 – Part 2

Here is part 2 everybody! I hope you like it! 😀 And I want to give a special thanks to Magic Star, who let me interview her!

Intro Voice – Welcome back to… The Spotted Show!

SD – Hey ha hey everybody! Glad to be back! If you’re just tuning in I’ve just been chatting with Magic Star here and letting our viewers know what her own chat show is all about! 😉

*Dr Hare walks on stage*

Dr Hare – Ah! There you are Magic Star! You weren’t in your normal studio. I see you’re interviewing another fool! 😈

SD – Uh… Dr Hare everybody!

*audience slowly starts to applause*

*SD whispers to MS*

SD – Magic, do you know why Dr Carrot Crazy is here for you?

*MS whispers to SD*

MS – I think so. He looks like he’s in an evil mood – perhaps if we go along with it, we can distract him!

*MS turns to Dr Hare*

MS – Dr Hare! So, um, fantastic to see you! I think you’ve got the wrong facts though – Spotted Dragon here is interviewing me! Would you like to join us?

Dr Hare – Well… Why not? The camera always seems to love me!

SD – Glad to have you Dr Hare! I’ll even go get you some carrot juice for you. I’ll be right back… 😉

*SD winks at MS*

Dr Hare – Why thank you Spotted. You look familiar… Anyway what is SD doing interviewing you?

*MS looks relieved that Dr Hare hasn’t done anything evil yet. She picks up her water glass and tips it back, only to remember that she has already finished it. MS puts the glass down, embarrassed, but luckily the audience don’t seem to notice anything wrong – neither with the water glass nor with the situation*

MS – SD and I are great friends, Dr Hare. Umm… I heard you were great friends with the famous director Carson Willis. Is this true?

*MS knows it’s not true – she’s just trying to stall. She nervously glances towards the door that SD just exited through*

Dr Hare – No, no we are not great friends at all! He wouldn’t produce the film I wrote about me! It was going to be a great production! It had all the good movie characteristics! Drama… Romance! Suspense! It would have been the best thing since Night of the Living Carrots.

*Now to SD, while Dr Hare continues complaining*

SD – Err… umm… what should I do?!? Why is that bunny so crazy?!? Why do I always talk to myself?

*SD is in her dressing room. She glances at her mini-fridge*

SD – Hmmm…

*SD grabs a water bottle out of the fridge, some carrots, puts a bunch of potted plants on a cart, and leaves the room*

SD – But where would I find the – Oh yeah!

*SD rushes to the dumpster outside, where she picks up a lot of card board boxes. She then finds an empty closet and goes to work*

*Now back to MS and Dr. Hare on stage*

MS – Romance, you say? …

Dr Hare – You heard correctly.

MS – *forces a smile* And who would be the, em, lucky lady, then?

Dr Hare – *confused* I’m sorry?

MS – The lucky lady?

Dr Hare – Is lady a new word for “Carrot”

MS – Huh?

Dr Hare – She was a beautiful carrot, she was.

*Audience laughs uncomfortably*

MS – I’m sure she was, ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha *trails off uncomfortably*

MS – *collecting herself* So do you think you could tell us a bit more about this movie?

Dr Hare – *adjusts himself in his chair* I sure could. So, the opening scene is me relaxing in my Cryptids Island mansion, watching a surround sound, blu-ray DVD whilst relaxing in a hot tub full of bubble bath and sipping a cup of fine dark hot chocolate, imported from South America…

*Having successfully distracted the vile villain, Magic Star relaxes a little in her chair*

*SD suddenly bursts through the door*

SD – Dr. Hare! I have a special treat for you, since I couldn’t find the carrot juice.

Dr Hare – A surprise for me? How nice! Wait – I don’t like nice!

*SD and MS exchange glances. SD looks stressed*

SD – Um… I think your confused. You should like when people do nice things for you! Because a nice thing could be… letting you take over the world!

Dr Hare – Oh! Right, right.

*MS, Dr Hare, and the Camera Man follow SD off stage. The Camera Man’s camera view appears on the TV on stage.*

SD – Here we are!

Dr Hare – This is it? My own closet, really? ……I LOVE IT!!!

*Audience laughs back in the stage room*

SD – It’s not the closet, it’s what’s in it…

*SD opens the door and a huge bucktoothed smile appears on Dr Hare’s face as he rushes in to play*

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MS – Cool! So… exactly what did you do?

SD – I made a little home for Dr Carrot Crazy! Whenever he comes to bug us during our shows we can just push and lock him in here. There’s a camera in there too, so we can keep an eye on him. The box over there is just a cardboard box, the water is a water bottle, the wheel is painted cardboard, and the ground is dirt I got from some potted plants. It’s the best I could do in the time I had. Anyway, lets get back to the stage.

*Everyone except Dr Hare goes back to the stage*

SD – Look at that! We’re pretty much out of time! Any last words Magic?

*Magic Star smiles as the audience give her a polite applause*

MS – Well, Spotted Dragon – it’s been an honor! I had a great time – switching roles with you and interviewing our unexpected guest included! I’ll certainly be watching the next episode of the Spotted Show.

SD – Well I think we can all agree that we had an… interesting time tonight. Thanks for coming Magic Star, thanks everyone! I had fun with my first show! Hope you liked it, I’ll see you next time! Stay spotted! :mrgreen:

Intro Voice – And that concludes Episode 1 – The Magical Pilot of The Spotted Show, with your host… Spotted Dragon!

Hope you liked it and my crazy “Get Rid of Dr. Hare” plan! 😉

~SD

The Spotted Show – Episode 1

Hey guys. This is the ATP’s last story that we have ready for our new page. Although it’s not exactly a story, it’s a chat show! Yep, that’s right, Spotted Dragon will be interviewing Poptropicans and Adventurers around the world! They could be famous, or just a commenter on the ATP. Who knows? Maybe you could be interviewed by me someday! 😉

Anyway, I’ve just made the first episode. I’ll show you the first part of it now and the second part later.

I want to thank Magic Star for inspiring this show though. Go here to see her chat show! Anyway, let the show begin!

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